Wednesday, October 22, 2008
Animal Farm
The animals accepts Napolean's lies because most of the animals are not as literate as the pigs. One of the horse, Boxer has a slogan he always says," Napolean's always right." Most of the animals in the story can not get pass the letter "d,"but the pigs are literate. The pigs are smarter than the other animals in the farm. The animals are not literate and that is why the pigs take contorl of them.
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Strong topic sentence and good reasons.
However, you needed more red sentences (more evidence from the text) that connects directly to your reasons. The paragraph should be 10-11 sentences.
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